Doing Exercise At Late Night

I 'd prefer to do exercise at late night, about 10-11pm because the street becomes so quiet at this time. I like walking on to the nearby square near my home [This a very common mistake.  You are telling us that your home is very beautiful.  I am sure you mean the square.  My way avoids this situation.  If you want to express it in the original structure, then write it as "... walking to the beautiful square near my home" or "walking to the square which is very beautiful and is near my home." ]which is so beautiful, I think. [Don't use "I think".  Makes you sound wishy washy.  Be more assertive.  In most cases, you can leave this out by the way you write.] lots a There are many trees and flowers, a great giant sculpture, and a fountain and some structures for exercising. [There is no plural form for equipment] sporting equipments. But However, it is aways noisy at during the day time and early in the night. , people Many use the place to dance and to sing there. But, ["but", "and", "or" are middle of the sentence conjunctions.  Don't place them in the beginning of the sentence.  There are exceptions to this rule.  To convey a certain emotion in a novel.] This is the time that just I enjoy all the square has to offer.  of them, The lights are shining and with changing colors. , the square The place is so quiet and yet becomes so amazing to me.

Doing Exercise At Late Night

I 'd prefer to do exercise late at night, about 10-11pm because the street becomes so quiet at that time. I like walking in the square near my home which is so beautiful, I think. Lots of trees and flowers, a great sculpture, and a fountain, and some exercise equipment. But it is aways noisy during the day time and early night, people dance and sing there. But, this time I just enjoy all of them, the lights are shining and changing colors, the square is so quiet and so amazing.

Ally, nice job. I changed the sporting to exercise because that's what I thought you meant. You had a few extra words here and there, but overall I understood everything that you meant. I also like to exercise at night.