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Sunday with my friends Well, this is another exercise from my grammar book: a translation from italian to english! I hope that somebody could correct the mistakes! Thank you! =) I have some good friends and, when it is possible, we do a lot of things together. For example on sunday, when it is sunny and the temperature isn't too cold, we often go to the countryside for a walk. In those days we wake up very early, we have breakfast and then we leave. Sometimes we go where there are horses for hire, so that some of us could have a long ride in the forest. In the meantime the others do what they like more. Thomas, for example, is passionated of flowers and plants and he goes finding rare exemplares for photographing them to increase his collection of photos. Also Vernon has a hobby: he studies bugs. Someone find it really disgusting, but in reality there is nothing strange about it. There are many different species of bugs and he can find them everywhere! Instead, my boyfriend Roman and I are quite lazy, indeed nobody of us likes walking, so usually we listen to the music and, when we think that everybody is hungry, we make some sandwiches for our picnic! After lunch we spend few time all together, talking, having a rest or reading. There is always something new to discover in the countryside, so nobody of us gets ever bored. When it is cold or rainy, we go somewhere downtown (or in the citycenter???): we can visit a museum or an exhibition. Nobody of us likes cinema, but we like very much theatre so, sometimes, we watch a comedy or a musical. Now we would like doing something different, do you have any idea of what we could do?

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Sunday with my Friends

 

Well, this is another exercise from my grammar book; a translation from Italian to English!  I hope that somebody could can correct the mistakes! Thank you! =)

I have some good friends and, when it is possible, we do a lot of things together. For example on Sunday, when it is sunny and the temperature isn't not too cold outside, we often go to take a walk in the countryside for a walk. In those days, we wake up very early, we have breakfast before leaving and then we leave. Sometimes we go where there are we can hire some horses for hire, so that some of us could to have a long rides in the forest. In the meantime the Others do what they like would do more. Thomas, for example, is passionated of about flowers and plants. [You can use the word, "flora"] and He goes finding rare exemplares looking uncommon ones to shoot  for photographing them to increase for his photo collection of photos. Also Vernon also has a hobby: he studies bugs. Someone may find it them really disgusting, but in reality there is nothing strange revolting about it. There are many different species of bugs insects and he can find them anywhere everywhere! However, Instead, my boyfriend, Roman and I are quite lazy. Indeed nobody of us we don't likes walking, and so usually we listen to the music instead.and, When we think that everybody is hungry, we have pre-made make some sandwiches for our picnic! After lunch, we would spend few time all together, chatting, talking, having a resting or reading.


There is always something new to discover in the countryside., so nobody None of us ever gets ever bored.  When it is cold or rainy, we go somewhere in the downtown. (or in the citycenter???): There we can would visit a museum or an exhibition. Nobody None of us likes movies cinema, but we like very much like the theatre. So, sometimes, we watch a comedy or a musical instead.


Now we would like to doing something different., Do you have any idea of what we could can do? [I prefer, "Any suggestions?"]

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Sunday with my friends

Well, this is another exercise from my grammar book: a translation from italian to english!
I hope that somebody could will correct the mistakes!
Thank you! =)

I have some good friends and, when it is possible, we do a lot of things together. For example, on Sunday, when it is sunny and the temperature isn't too cold, we often go to the countryside for a walk. In On those days we wake up very early, we have breakfast and then we leave. Sometimes we go where there are horses for hire, so that some of us could have a long ride in the forest.

 

In the meantime the others do what they like more. Thomas, for example, is passionated of  about flowers and plants and he goes finding rare examples for photographing them to increase his collection of photos. Also Vernon has a hobby: he studies bugs. Someone people find it really disgusting, but in reality there is nothing strange about it. There are many different species of bugs and he can find them everywhere!

 

Instead On the contrary, my boyfriend Roman and I are quite lazy, indeed nobody neither of us likes walking, so usually we listen to the music and, when we think that everybody is hungry, we make some sandwiches for our picnic! After lunch we spend few some time all together, talking, having a rest or reading.
There is always something new to discover in the countryside, so nobody none of us gets ever bored.


When it is cold or rainy, we go somewhere downtown. (or in the citycenter???): We can visit a museum or an exhibition. Nobody None of us likes cinema, but we like very much like theatre so, sometimes, we watch a comedy or a musical.
Now we would like doing something different. Do you have any idea of what we could do?

 

Great job Sara!

-English Tutor Amy

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Well said! :)
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Friends are a gift from God.

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