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A nice morning I had a bad cold last few days , I lied in the bed for three days ,couldn't do anything, only ate a little biscuit and drank some milk.This morning I feel better than before ,so I got up and came to office. This is really a bad morning, when I arrived the office, there was so mess and dirty, with a bad smell full of the office, I almost couldn't breathe.My boss, a single parent , got ready to go to work, his daughter, a five years old girl , still not go to the kindergarten. I really didn't want help him to take the kid go to kindergarten,it's not my job, but if I didn't , the kid would go to kindergarten by herself , so I have to do that. Then I took a long time to clean the office.my boss never clean the office even if I'm not here for few days.

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A nice morning

I had a bad cold the last few days. I lay in the bed for three days. I couldn't do anything. I only ate a little biscuit and drank some milk. This morning I feel better than before, so I got up and came to the office.
This is really a bad morning. When I arrived the office, it was so messy and dirty, with a bad smell throughout the office. I almost couldn't breathe. My boss, a single parent, got ready to go to work. His daughter, a five years old girl, was still not ready to go to the kindergarten.
I really didn't want help him to take the kid go to kindergarten, it's not my job. But if I didn't, the kid would go to kindergarten by herself, so I had to do that. Then I took a long time to clean the office. My boss never cleans the office even if I'm not here for a few days.

 

Each complete statement should be contained in it's own sentence. Also, don't forget to put a space after the punctuation. In a few places, there were parts of speech that were missing or used in the wrong form (singular/plural, etc.).

 

When you say "I only ate a little biscuit," you are saying you ate one, small biscuit. If that is true, you expressed it correctly.  Otherwise, you would say "I only ate a few biscuits."

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What a Nice Morning!

 

I had a bad cold the last few days , I lied and was bed-ridden in the bed for three days. ,couldn't do anything, I cannot do anything except to only ate a little eat biscuits and drank drink some milk.This morning I feel felt better than before ,so I got up and came to work. office.


This is really a bad morning, When I arrived reached the office, there it was so messy and dirty; with and so odiferous the place was that  bad smell full of the office, I almost couldn't cannot breathe.  My boss, is a single parent and has a daughter of five years in age.  , got ready to go to work, his daughter, a five years old girl , still not go to the kindergarten.

I really didn't did not want help him to take the kid by taking her go to the kindergarten.  ,it's It is not in my job description, but if I didn't don't, the kid would go to kindergarten by herself my heart cannot bear to see such a small child go by herself.  My heart softened...  , so I have to do that.

 

Then It took a long time to clean the office.  My boss never cleans the office even if I'm I am not here in for few days.  What a nice morning!  This is to end your essay with a sarcasm to tie in with your title.

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