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Planning Activies
Many people don’t like to plan every detail of their lives. But in fact, planning is a good way to save both time and stress.
The Most of people have never organized their things to do. , so it causes that they don´t have enough time to do everything and This can produce much stress in them. because they they never feel they have enough time to do everything they want.
If they planned all their dialy activities them it would be easier for them to do, because they don´t wouldn't spend time in on unnecessary things. so the time would be utilized correctly.
Planning activities is an excellent tool to organized organize our days and don´t not to be so stressed.
Thanks for the corrections (:
Alda, I tried to correct your note by keeping most of your vocabulary intact. I understood exactly what you were saying. I hope others can give you suggestions.
Bien hecho!
Planning activies
Many people don’t like to plan every detail of their lives. But in fact, planning is a good way to save time. The most of people have never organized their things to do, so it causes that they don´t have enough time to do everything and this produce much stress in them. If they planned all their dialy activities them would be easier to do, because they don´t would spend time in unnecessary things, so the time would be utilized correctly. Planning activities is an excellent tool to organized our days and don´t to be stressed.
Thanks for the corrections (:
Many people don't like to plan every detail of their lives. However, planning is a good way to save time. Most people have never organized their things to do, so they don't have enough time to do everything. This causes much stress in them. If they planned their daily activities it would much easier, since they wouldn't spend time on unnecessary things and time would be utilized correctly. Planning activities is an excellent tool to organize our days and to relieve stress.
things to do : many times we just say 'your schedule' Alda, bien hecho...
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