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I still suck, for lack of a better word, but this is a different song. Please correct me if I am miss-pronouncing something.
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aha...thats amazing and you're still saying it sucks,but next time when you sing this song,take a deep breath,then try,some words need more focus in ending specially vowels.
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Suggestions already given seem quite enough so I just want to say that I found it really cute :P
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wow, your sound is really very nice, you have done well , just need to focus some accent as Tushar suggested you. All the best! keep it up!
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good try :)
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Second attempt
I still suck, for lack of a better word, but this is a different song. Please correct me if I am miss-pronouncing something.
just vowel sounds in 'bole' and 'teri' sounds english accent. improve this 'o' ओ and 'e' ए sound(like we say alphabet 'a').
as u have recorded and as far as i can remember song, lyrics are
बोले चूड़ियाँ, बोले कंगना, हाय मैं हो गई तेरी साजणा (or साजना ), तेरे बिन जियो नईयो लगदा मैं तो मर गई याँ
google translate can be of some(some only, not always pronunciation is natural) help to correct ur pronunciation, paste hindi text in box translate to hindi and listen it.
but here googletranslate cant tell how to correctly pronounce चूड़िया choodiyaan, and it has limitations ofcourse, ur hindi speaking contacts can help u here :)
except these 2, 'd' in 'choodiyaan' and u are saying naijo it is 'naiyoo'
other than these,everything is better than fine.
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