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Summer in NY (part 2) Before beginning the good part, it must be said that there is no adventure without difficulties, and so it was. I rented a van for the first five days, but it didn't last more than a couple of hours owing to having a puncture while crossing a dirt road among fields and woodlands. I don't recall being in such a situation before, lost in the middle of nowhere. Finally, I could contact a mechanic who changed the wheel, but paying rather high for it.

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Okay, there are many different ways to go about this, but I'll just give you some suggestions. :)

 

Summer in NY (part 2)

Before beginning getting to the good part, it must be said that there is no adventure without difficulties. And so it was goes. I rented a van for the first five days, but it didn't last more than a couple of hours owing to having a due to a puncture in the tires while crossing a dirt road among along fields and woodlands. I don't recall being in such a situation before; lost in the middle of nowhere. Finally, I could was able to contact a mechanic who changed the wheel tire, but paying I had to pay a rather high price for it.

 

Overall, you did really well. It was completely understandable! Keep it up!! =)

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