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'Prompt' game
The resounding of the drop of water, the remnant of a thunderous rain, which fell into a small puddle of water nearby, woke her up. All she could see through the dark narrow alley (no comma here) are the tall buildings in their pompous gaiety and a shining bright full moon.
She rose up with her feeble legs (no comma here) that were exhausted by the journey it made to reach here. Taking the support of the dustbin beside her, she rose up thinking, "I should go find him, my only friend. I should never give up."
"I hope I can find him in this city. I want to see him at least once before I vanish."
She started walking towards the end of the valley, taking the umbrella by hand, remembering the first time she met him on the snowy mountains.
Then, no one took care of me. I was left alone by the herd. They were disgusted to see me, an abnormal one born in the herd.
But, he was the only one who was not afraid of seeing me. Saying that I was the most beautiful rabbit he ever found. At first I was a little afraid, by this unexpected hospitality. But, he kept on coming to see me. You should see his happiness when I came out of my hiding bush, mustering courage to greet my friend.
We played daily. I don't know how many days passed by. But one day, he didn't come to play. He didn't come to see me. I waited for him for several weeks, but in vain. Finally, I decided to search for him in the neighboring town and resolved myself to meet him whatever the cost may be.
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