Search from various English teachers...
China flagSIMPLE
English diary ( I hope someone can help me the alter my writing ) Today is a typical saturday.There is nothing special happened.because today is weekend so we don''t have to attend class.When I wake up in the morning I find it's dark outside,but it's already 7 o'clock,as I look out the window the weather is not very well.The sky looks grey and dusty and I can't help worrying that whether it will rain.However, the fact is that I don't need to worry about it at all because sun come out at about 8 o'clock and it's rather hot at noon. Every saturday I get up and then go to canteen to eat breakfast with my good friend-----fisher.she is a very friendly and honesty person.I like staying with her.After the breakfast usually we go to the library and study there.Today there are so many people in the library,we find that our often sitting position are taken by other people.Therefore,we have to find other seats. We often go to eat lunch at 11:30,but today fisher receives a short message says that her express delivery has already came and she must go to east gate to receive the express delivery.So I accompanies her to fetch the express delivery.

Corrections · 4

0

English diary ( I hope someone can help me the to (alter) correct my writing )

Today is a typical saturday.There is nothing special that happened. Because today is weekend (so) we don''t have to attend class. When I wake up in the morning I find it's dark outside, even if it's already 7 o'clock. As I look out the window the weather (is) looks not very well  so good. The sky (looks) is grey and dusty clouded and I can't help worrying that whether  if it will rain or not. However, the fact is that I don't need to worry about it at all because the sun comes out at about 8 o'clock and it's rather hot at noon it becomes rather hot. 
Every saturday I get up and then go to the canteen to eat breakfast with my good friend-----fisher. She is (a) very friendly and honesty person. I like staying being with her. After (the) breakfast usually we go to the library (and) to study there. Today there are so many people in the library, we (find) discover that our often sitting position regular seats are taken by other people. Therefore,(we have to find other seats) we need to look for other seats.
We often go to eat  lunch at 11:30, but today fisher receives a short message that says that her express delivery has already came arrived and she must  go to the east gate to (receive) pick up theis express delivery. So I accompaniesy her to (fetch) collect the express delivery.

 

Well done !

0
I always mess up my tenses. :(
0
I hope I can write like you. All the best. :)

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today