First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello! I'm a Chinese girl from Henan province. I've studied English for many years, but still can't understand when someone is speaking and also can't express myself (I think my words..isn't used incorrectly,but I think express myself is better,just my own opinion)fluently, so I hope people who are good at English can teach/help me. In return, if you'd like to try our language, I'll teach you, too. Then, we can exchange our culture and we can be good friends in the future. Come on, friends! Bridge up our friendship!

I think there's no major errors in this essay and it's a good one.

I don't know if you can really understand a foreign language orally,but I can find that your written language is good..

and if you think you stink at English listening and speaking..that's because you lack some particular practice..