My Family

My family has four members. [This is not wrong but it's not the way best to express] There are four in my family, my parents, father, my mother, my a young sister and me. My father is 58 years old. He who used to work in a seafood factory of seafood but he is retired now. My father He is short and thin. He is but is gentle [I would prefer to write it as "but is a gentle soul" to express greater warmth]. In contrast opposition to my father, my mother is tall but has a quick temper and  sometimes angry. However, both of them they are very kind hearted. After his retirement, he retiring from the job in the factory, My father assist helps [there is a subtle difference between these two words.  To assist someone usually means that the one you are helping is superior.  One does not say, the nurse helps the doctor but to assist.  "help" does not have such connotation] my mother in her working in ours small little/tiny [go check the subtle difference between "small" and "little" in the dictionary.  If you can't find the answer, just ask me :) ] store. They have been working hard [the way you wrote means that they are now NO longer working hard!] to earn money to provide for the family all members. My young sister, is 16 years old.__She's is clever but sometimes can be quite mischievous. She studies in a nearby high school. All of them are living We all live in the Quang Binh province. It's the native land of us. And As for me, I'm am 20 years of age;  old. I'm a 3rd third years student. I study at the Ha Noi Hanoi [This is how it is spelt in English]University; studying of pharmacy [or you can write, "I am a junior at the Ha Noi University School of Pharmarcy"].