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第一次出去了 Recently, I have been indoors every day. I sometimes go running, but I usually make websites. 最近,我每天在里面上班。我有时去跑步了,但是我通常做网站。 Yesterday, I went out all day long. Last night I went to sleep very late, so I woke up very late. This weekend I am very tired. 昨天,我整天出去了。昨天晚上我睡觉了很晚,所以我起床了很晚。这周末我很累。 Maybe if I go out more often, I will have more energy. 如果我出去了很多,我可能有很多精力。

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第一次出去了外出

Recently, I have been indoors every day. I sometimes go running, but I usually make websites.
最近,我每天在里面上班。我有时去跑步了,但是我通常做网站

最近,我每天都呆在室内。有时候我会去跑步,但通常我都在忙于制作网站/但我通常都在忙于制作网站。 

Yesterday, I went out all day long. Last night I went to sleep very late, so I woke up very late. This weekend I am very tired.
昨天,我整天出去了。昨天晚上我睡觉了很晚,所以我起床了很晚。这周末我很累。

昨天,我出去了一整天。加上昨晚(我)也睡得很晚,所以我很晚才起床。这周末我很累。

The green part make the whole sentence sound more smooth and natural. :)

Maybe if I go out more often, I will have more energy.
如果我出去了很多,我可能有很多精力。

也许如果我多出去走走,会更有精神。

 

 

 

 

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第一次外出

Recently, I have been indoors every day. I sometimes go running, but I usually make websites.
最近,我每天都在室内上班。我有时会去跑步,但是我通常都在做网站。

Yesterday, I went out all day long. Last night I went to sleep very late, so I woke up very late. This weekend I am very tired.
昨天,我在外面呆了一整天,晚上很晚才睡觉,所以我很晚才起床。这周末我很累。

Maybe if I go out more often, I will have more energy.
也许多去外面走走,会让我有更多的精力。

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第一次出去了

Recently, I have been indoors every day. I sometimes go running, but I usually make websites.
最近,我每天在屋里上班。我有时去跑步,但是我通常我都在做网站。

Yesterday, I went out all day long. Last night I went to sleep very late, so I woke up very late. This weekend I am very tired.
昨天,我整天都在外面。晚上我很晚才睡觉,所以很晚才起来。这周好累啊。

Maybe if I go out more often, I will have more energy.
或许如果我出去很多,我就会更有很多精力。

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“如果、但是”什么的,可以少用~ Your Chinese note will seem more natural if you use fewer "if or but"~
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第一次出去了

Recently, I have been indoors every day. I sometimes go running, but I usually make websites.
最近,我每天在里面上班。我有时去跑步了,但是我通常做网站。
最近,我都呆在室内。我有时会去跑步,但我大部分都在做网站。
Yesterday, I went out all day long. Last night I went to sleep very late, so I woke up very late. This weekend I am very tired.
昨天,我整天出去了。昨天晚上我睡觉了很晚,所以我起床了很晚。这周末我很累。
昨天,我一整天都在外面。昨晚我很晚才睡觉。所以我也起得很晚。这个周末我很累。
Maybe if I go out more often, I will have more energy.
如果我出去了很多,我可能有很多精力

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