The Effect of Technology
With the science and technology highly developing,many aspects,especially in the way of communication,have changed beyond our imagination.We prefer to choose more convenient and popular way to contact others.Some changes can be obviously seen around us that people use mobile phone instead of writing letters and public telephone,besides,computers are playing an important role in our life.
First,the high technology bring convenience.The development of computer changes our life.Decades ago,people needed to do a lot of calculation on hand because they did not have a computer,and more obvious,they did not have the software for calculation.As the result of that,people spent hours on the equations that a computer can solve in just a minute.Since the development of computer,people are able to use some kind of software to solve some difficult problems.Computer becomes the most useful equipment for the scientists because they can use their time more efficiently.
Many people have a cellphone.It just appears on the market for about 10 years.It's convenient to the users because we can talk to anyone we want with a phone.Also,we can communicate with others by making a phone call instead of sending letters.It is a useful way to communicate.
However,high technology as it is,some problems also appear in it.People may depend too much on computer and other new technology,which creates a common phenomenon that people spent less time talking with their friends face to face,this in the long run is bad for their friendship,worse still,it can result in obesity as people mostly sit on a chair or lie in bed.Meanwhile,the high technology such as mobile phone have a lot of radiation that is also bad for our health.We should use the technology reasonable due to that.
In my opinion,we should do some thing in,how to communicate with your friend much more.And how can make our health much better.As far as I am concerned we can choose some ways,such as the Green commuting.We can go for a traveling by bike not by car.As we know,we use the purpose of these things bring us convenience rather than harm.
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The Effect of Technology
With the development of science and technology highly developing,_many aspects,_especially in the way of communication,_have changed beyond our imagination._We prefer to choose more convenient and popular ways to contact others._Some changes can be [are] obviously seen around us in that people use mobile phones instead of writing letters and using public telephones,_besides which,_computers are playing an important role in our lives.
[or .. computers play an important role in our life]
First,_the high technology brings convenience._The development of computers changes our life._Decades ago,_people needed to do a lot of calculation on by hand because they did not have a computer,_and more obviously,_they did not have the software for calculation [to do the calculation]._As the result of that,_people spent hours on the equations that a computer can solve in just a minute._Since the development of computer,_people are able to use some kind of software to solve some difficult problems._Computers have become s the most useful equipment for the scientists because they can use their time more efficiently.
Many people have a cellphone._It just appeared on the market for about 10 years ago._It's convenient to the users because we can talk to anyone we want to with a phone._Also,_we can communicate with others by making a phone call instead of sending letters._It is a useful way to communicate.
However,_high technology as it is,_some problems also appear in it [it comes with it's own set of problems]._People may depend too much on computers and other new technology,_which creates a common phenomenon that people spend less time talking with their friends face to face._This in the long run is bad for their friendship,_worse still,_it can result in obesity as people mostly sit on a chair or lie in bed._Meanwhile,_the high technology such as mobile phone has a lot of radiation that is also bad for our health._We should use the technology reasonablly judiciously due to that.
In my opinion,_we should do some thing in concentrate more on how to communicate with your our friends much more,_and also, how we can make our health much better._As far as I am concerned we can choose some ways,_such as the using Green commuting._We can go for a traveling by bike and not by car._As we know,_the way we use the purpose of these things brings us convenience rather than harm.
Hi Lames, it's been a long time ...
Rule 1. ALWAYS, ALWAYS put a space after a comma or full stop (period) !!
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