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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am learning Korean, because I want to study abroad and work in South Korea I also want to make friends from South Korea. My native languages are Serbo-Croatian and German. I was born in the former Yugoslavia but due to the war there in 1992 I grew up in Germany. {Which is why both Serbo-Croatian and German are both my first/native languages} I want to dance for the rest of my life. I write songs and rap and I model sometimes on occasion {but I'm not good for modeling so I don't do it much}

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself   자기 소개

I am learning Korean, because I want to study abroad and work in South Korea.(한국으로 유학가고 그곳에서 일하고 싶어서 한국어를 배우는 중입니다.) I also want to make friends from South Korea.(한국 친구들도 사귀고 싶습니다.)  My native languages are Serbo-Croatian and German.(제 모국어는 세르보크로아티아어와 독일어입니다.) I was born in the former Yugoslavia but due to the war there in 1992 I grew up in Germany.(저는 옛 유고슬라비아 지역에서 태어났지만, 1992년에 일어난 전쟁 때문에 독일에서 자랐습니다.){Which is why both Serbo-Croatian and German are both my first/native languages}(그래서 세르보크로아티아어와 독일어 둘 다 제 모국어가 됬습니다.) 

I want to dance for the rest of my life.(앞으로 평생 춤을 추며 살고 싶습니다.) I write songs and rap and I model sometimes on occasion(저는 노래와 랩 음악을 작곡하고 가끔 모델 일도 합니다.) {but I'm not good for modeling so I don't do it much} (하지만 모델 일은 소질이 없어서 많이 하지는 않습니다.)

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Thank you for the advice. I will write it once I have the Korean keyboard. It is a little hard to do it now, but thank you !!
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If you want to learn Korean and practice your writing, please try to write in Korean. You will get helpful corrections from native speakers.

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