Day trip I took a day trip by train with my friend. In there, we ate sweetfish. They were delicious. But there are not any place of interest. So we backed few time from there. And then, we went t

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momosan

Day trip I took a day trip by train with my friend. In there, we ate sweetfish. They were delicious. But there are not any place of interest. So we backed few time from there. And then, we went to IZAKAYA:) I had a good day!

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I am not English mothertongue, but I guess with: "But there are not any place of interest,So we backed few time from there". She meant: "But there were no places of interest. So we were back soon" Soo desu ka?

Day trip

I took a day trip by train with my friend.
In there, we ate sweetfish. They were delicious.
But there are not any place of interest. So we backed few time from there. ??

I am not sure what you mean here, it is very hard to understand? but everything else is good, you should make your sentences more longer, as they are quite short!
And then, we went to IZAKAYA:)
I had a good day!

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