my first essay in italki

hi everybody~ I am a Chinese student, and now I am studing in high school for senior 1. Chinese is my mother language. And we have a subject for English. I had studied it when I was 6. And I can speak daily conversations in English :) . I have a big fan in Italian. And I am trying my best to study it . I hope I can visit Italy one day. And at that time, I can  frulently speak Italian. :) nice to meet u . I want to make friends with u :)

My first  italki parapraph

Hi everybody. I am a Chinese student and now I am studying at  a senior high school.  Chinese is my native language and  we have English as one of our subjects. I  studied it when I was 6 and I can hold an ordinary  conversation in English.

I am a big fan of Italian and I am trying my best to study it . I hope  that I can visit Italy one day. When that time comes, I  hope that I will  be able to speak fluent Italian. 

Nice to meet you. I would like to make friends with you.

Nice to meet you too Miss Salmon. Please be aware that an essay consists of 3 or more paragraphs, so therefore I have changed your title. Do not use text language such as :) or u in essays.

my first essay in italki

hi everybody~ I am a Chinese student, and now I am studing in high school for senior 1. Chinese is my mather language. And we have a subjust for English. I had studied it when I was 6. And I can speak daily conversation in English :) . I have a big fan in Italian. And I am trying my best to study it . I hope I can visit Italy one day. And at that time, I can speak a frulently Italian. :) nice to meet u . I want to make friends with u :)

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Hi everybody~ I am a Chinese student and now I am studying in a high school for senior 1. Chinese is my mother language and we have an English subject. I have been studying English since I was 6 and I can hold up a daily conversation. I am a big fan of Italian and I am trying my best to study it. I hope I can visit Italy one day and maybe by then, I can speak fluent Italian. Nice to meet you. I want to be a friend with you.

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hi everybody~ I am a Chinese student, and now I am a high school student senior 1. Chinese is my mother language. And we have a subjust for English. I have been studied english when I was 6. And I can speak daily conversation in English :) . I am a big fan of Italian. And I am trying my best to learn italian and hoping that  i can visit Italy one day. And at that time, I can speak fluent in Italian language. :) nice to meet u . I want to make friends with u :)