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My morning. I have been busy every morning lately. Let me introduce my morning to you. First of all, I have got up 5:55 a.m. and driniking a cup of water for wake up. And I have been sitting on my desk with my netbook. Because I have heared "Goodmorning Pops (GMP)" through "KBS kong programs" When all arrangements have been finished, I have studied Eng with GMP for 1 hours. Thanks to GMP, My Eng skill has gone up by about 100% After that, I went to toilet, I have washed and I have had my hair done. Finally, as soon as I have ate breakfast, I'm going to my workspace.

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My morning.

I have been busy every morning lately.

Let me introduce my morning (routine) to you.

First of all, I have got get up at 5:55 a.m. and drink a cup of water for to wake up.

And I have been sitting sit on at my desk with my netbook, and I listen to

Because I have heared "Goodmorning Pops (GMP)" through on KBS. (if KBS is a TV channel, it should be enough to use that only)

When all arrangements have been finished, I have studied Eng with GMP for 1 hours. (I am not really sure of this sentence, one my suggestion would be: "Once the programme finishes, I have practiced my English with GMP for 1 hour."

Thanks to GMP, my English skills has improved by about 100%.

After that (Afterwards), I went go to the toilet, I have wash and I have had my hair done do my hair.

Finally, as soon as I have ate eaten/had/finished my breakfast, I 'm will go to my workplace. 

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My typical morning.

I have been busy every morning lately.

Let me tell you about my typical morning.

OK, you're going to tell us about a regular habit, so most of your verbs should be in present simple.

If you describe this one morning up until now, then you could use present perfect - only sometimes! It's wrong to use present perfect excessively. 

First of all, I have got get up at 5:55am and drink a cup of water to wake up.

Then I have been sitting at my desk with my notebook, to listen to Because I have heared "Good Morning Pops" (GMP) through "KBS Kong programs".

When all arrangements have been I finished with that, I have study English with GMP for one hours.

Thanks to GMP, my English skill has gone up by improved about 100%. 

Please don't abbreviate English.

You can use present perfect here because you are talking about this moment now (not your regular schedule).

Skills improve. Levels increase or go up.


Afterwards, I go to the toilet, I have washed and I have had fix my hair done.

I have had my hair done means you have a new haircut now, thanks to a professional hairdresser.  Fix my hair is the general phrase, but it sounds a bit feminine. Usually men say comb my hair.

Finally, as soon as I have ate breakfast is finished, I'm going to my workplace.

 

In spite of my corrections, I have to say "Good on you!" for having a productive morning. :)

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I have to get up at 6:00 a.m. It's painful. But enjoy your every day! :)

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