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The Independence Day Today, September 7, we Brazilians commemorate the day that Brazil became free to choose its destiny and free to use its own resources. Brazil left Portuguese Empire in 1822, and since then we are fight to build a nation. Brazilian colonization was far different from other countries, Brazil was an exploitation colony, so we have to start not from zero but from minus something. Brazil is unique because of its people, we are from around the world, but here there are no something-Brazilians, we are all Brazilians. Congratulations Brazil and its Brazilians. A piece of our beautiful national hymn. Deitado eternamente em berço esplêndido, ao som do mar e à luz do céu profundo, fulguras, ó Brasil, florão da América, iluminado ao sol do Novo Mundo!

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Today, September 7, we Brazilians commemorate the day that Brazil became free to choose its destiny and free to use its own resources.


Brazil left the Portuguese Empire in 1822, and ever since, we have been fighting to build a nation.
Brazilian colonization was far different from other countries. Brazil was an exploitation colony, so we have to start, not from zero,  but from minus something.

Brazil is unique because of its people; we are from all around the world, but here there are no something-Brazilians, we are all Brazilians. 

Congratulations Brazil and its Brazilians.

A piece of our beautiful national hymn.

Deitado eternamente em berço esplêndido, ao som do mar e à luz do céu profundo, fulguras, ó Brasil, florão da América, iluminado ao sol do Novo Mundo!

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"Brazil was an exploitation colony"

I guess that works but I think "an exploited colony" would work better.

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The Independence Day

Today, September 7, we Brazilians commemorate the day that Brazil became free to choose its destiny and free to use its own resources.
Brazil left the Portuguese Empire in 1822, and since then we are have been fighting to build a nation.
The Brazilian colonization was far different from other countries, Brazil was an exploitation colony, so we had to start not from zero but from minus something.
Brazil is unique because of its people, we are from all around the world, but here there are no something-Brazilians, we are all Brazilians.
Congratulations Brazil and its Brazilians.

A piece of our beautiful national hymn.

Deitado eternamente em berço esplêndido, ao som do mar e à luz do céu profundo, fulguras, ó Brasil, florão da América, iluminado ao sol do Novo Mundo!


Feliz dia de independencia! :)
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The Independence Day

Today, September 7, we Brazilians commemorate the day that Brazil became free to choose its destiny and free to use its own resources.

Brazil left the Portuguese Empire in 1822, and since then we are fight have fought to build a nation. (and ever since, we have been fighting) 'ever since' meaning from then onwards until now.....

Brazilian colonization was far different from other countries. Brazil was an exploitation colony, so we have to start, not from zero,  but from minus something.

Brazil is unique because of its people; we are from all around the world, but here there are no something-Brazilians, we are all Brazilians.

Congratulations Brazil and its Brazilians.

A piece of our beautiful national hymn.

Deitado eternamente em berço esplêndido, ao som do mar e à luz do céu profundo, fulguras, ó Brasil, florão da América, iluminado ao sol do Novo Mundo!
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Well,good job~

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