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My Parents
There are three people in my family. My father,my mother, parents and I.
My dad Father and I are both followers of Buddhism. ,So He is an optimistic and liberal person with liberal views. He can put down everythings in his mind, and he believes in transmigration. He seldom told rarely tells me what I should I do or not and what I shouldn`t do. But However, through his examples behaviour, I have learnted to understand others; love others and be kind to others. In my eyes, he is the greatest man in the world.
My mother...Emmmm, well, she reminds me of the queen in the Snow White fairy tale. She insists that y mom ever told me,whenever and wherever, I introduce her, I must tell the other that say to the other person that she is the most beautiful woman in the world! Every time she said that,I could think of the queen in the fairy tale Snow White,haha,just a joke. Any way,now I want to tell you:Anyway, here it is, "My mom is gorgeous. I have Never seen a more an attractive woman there is than her on this earth! my mom" OK, There! I am done with finish my task. ^0^.
She Mother is a housewife but she never in despair desperate. I know this Her TV series-like life is very popular now,hah. She have has a down-to-earth personality and a hardworking spirit in whatever she is doing and do,she`ll definitely do it a job well done. And This also encourages me to be careful and responsible. do everything responsibly and carefully.
I love my parents. them,The only thing I can be sure of is that I will never ask for anything else more than their love. If there is really afterlife in the world, all I will give up all in return to be their child once more. they still could be my parents. The way you although means the same, but it implies that you are the center and they have to revolve around you. It should be other way around. Importance in choice of words and order. For example, in this couplet story...
子當承父業, 臣必報君恩 can be construed as 大大不敬! 以下犯上, 有欺君之罪! 先子而後父, 先臣而後君! It should be expressed as,
君恩臣必報, 父業子當承.
[Great job, just a few mistakes. Of course several different ways of saying what you want to say, but here is one version]
My Parents
There are three people in my family- my father,my mother,and I.
My dad is Buddhist (as am I), so he is an optimistic and liberal person. He can put down everything in his mind [I won't correct this, but I don't quite understand what this is supposed to mean], and he believes in transmigration. He seldom told me what should or should not do. However, through his behaviour I have learnt to understand and love others, and to be kind to them. In my eyes, he is the greatest man in the world.
My mother...Emmmm, she always told me that whenever and wherever I introduce her, I must tell the other that she is the most beautiful woman in the world. Every time she said that, I could think of the queen in the fairy tale "Snow White", haha, just a joke. [This can be corrected, but I am assuming you mean this to sound a bit informal anyway] Any way, now I want to tell you: "My mom is gorgeous. I have never seen a more attractive woman than my mom." OK, I finished my task. ^0^. My mom is a housewife but she is never 'desperate'. I know this TV series is very popular now, hah. She has a down-to-earth and hardworking spirit. Whatever she does, she definitely does it well. This also encourages me to do everything responsibly and carefully. I love my parents. The only thing I can be sure of is that I will never ask them for more than their love. If there's an afterlife, I would give all in return just so they could still be my parents.
[Great job!]
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