First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I am a Chinese gay （自己是同性恋吗？gay 是同性恋者 guy 是男孩、男人）. My English （因为自己有中国国籍这里要说是你的英文名字呀。）name is Patrick. I come from Beijing. I am so interested with in talking to you, not only because I hope to practice my English, but also because I am so keen to communicate with different cultures and different （不用重复）peoples in this wide world. I think, although, I am not very young but I am pretty handsome and so energetic that I am still thinking and considerting the opportunity to go abroad for further education. I like travelling ,especially travelling to other countries(你也可以用 'abroad’ 就是海外的意思）, although I have not traveled to many foreign countries. I like jogging and running. I have always had a dream that one day I could go to every corner of this world just by running. I am a movie buff and I like the iphone and ipad very much.

I am learning English because I want to study abroad. My native language is Chineses and I grew up in China.
I love jogging and going to the movies.

Hope we can talk more in ther future after we become friends.

I hope this helps.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I am a Chinese gay guy. My name is Patrick. I came come from Beijing. I am so interested with in talking to you. Not only because I hope to practice my English but also because I am so keen to communicate with different culture and different people different people from different cultures in this wide world. I think although I am not very young but I am pretty handsome and so energetic that I am still thinking and considering the opportunity to go abroad for further education. I like travelling, especially travelling to other country countries, although I did have not travel travelled to many countries. I like jogging and running. I always have have always had a dream that one day I can would go to every corner of this world just by running. I am a movie buff and I like Iphone and Ipad very much.

I am learning English becasue I want to study abroad. My native language is Chinese and I grew up in china.
I love jogging and going to the movie movies.

Hope we can talk more in the future after we become friends.

Just a bit of editing to help you with your English. If you have any questions, just ask! :)

I am not going to correct your essay because Liv has done a great job although she missed out some spelling errors or typos.  However, there some spelling errors which no spellchecker can find.  I am sure that you are saying that you are a "Chinese guy"...  Not a Chinese gay!  Unless you have 龍陽之癖! 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I am a Chinese gay.My name is Patrick. I came from Beijing. I am so interested with talking to you.Not only because I hope to practice my English but also becasue I am so keen to communicate with different culture and different people in this wide world. I think although I am not very young but I am pretty handsome and so energetic that I am still thinking and considerting the opportunity to go abroad for further education. I like travelling ,especially travelling to other country, although I did not travel to many countries. I like jogging and runing. I always have a dream that one day I can go to every corner of this world just by running. I am a movie buff and I like Iphone and Ipad very much.

I am learning English becasue I want to study abroad. My native language is Chineses and I grew up in china.
I love jogging and going to the movie.

Hope we can talk more in ther future after we become friends.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I am a Chinese gay. My name is Patrick. I came from Beijing. I am so interested to talk to you. Not only because I hope to practice my English but also because I am so keen to communicate with different cultures and different people in this wide world. I think although I am not very young but I am pretty handsome and so energetic that I am still thinking and considering the opportunity to go abroad for further education. I like travelling, especially travelling to other countries, although I did not travel to many countries. I like jogging and runing. I always have a dream that one day I can go to every corner of this world just by running. I am a movie buff and I like the Iphone and Ipad very much.

I am learning English becasue I want to study abroad. My native language is Chineses and I grew up in China.
I love jogging and going to the movies.

Hope we can talk more in the future after we become friends.