First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi I am Kim Hara，nice to meet you! -^ ^- Hara is my name and Kim is last name. My family came to Canada a few months ago,so I came here. Beacuse my english is so-soso poor but I will getting better(ㅋㅋ~~~) Im at school that called york university for music program in city toronto because my love is  I love playing the violin. I hope to be a famous musisian musician one day but if I want, I need to work hard and that meansthat I must wake up early often am bad at lazy ㅜ.ㅜ but I am happy because I meet met lots of new friends from different races which is not as common in koreas society. So ,one a reason I hope I can make new friends here and improve my so-so poor english to become good speaking english well !
-^ ^-
and now I work hard and go for to school very early.................... bye~~ ^ - ~ thx.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi I am Kim Hara. Nice to meet you! -^ ^- Hara is my name and Kim is last name. My family came to Canada a few months ago so I have come here because my English is so-so but getting better(ㅋㅋ~~~). Im I'm at a school called York University in the City of Toronto. I am here for the music program because my love is I love the violin. I hope to be a famous musisian one day, but if I want to achieve that, I need to work hard and that means I must wake up early often every day and I am bad at that. ㅜ.ㅜ But I am happy because I meet lots of new friends from different races which is not as common in Korea. society So one reason I hope I can make new friends here and improve my so-so English to become good English!
-^ ^-
and now I work hard and go for school very early.................... bye~~ ^ - ~ thx.

You write in a lively and interesting way, Hara. I'm sure your English will improve very quickly now you are living in Toronto with lots of chances to speak and write the language.

Just remember that all names in English have a capital letter at the start, for example English, Korea, Toronto, York. Good luck with your studies!