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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a girl, 26-year-old, from Guizhou, now living in Kunming, Yunnan Province. I like English, I am envious of people who can speak English, I hope one day I can be one of them. I love sports.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a girl,  26-year-old woman, from Guizhou, and I'm now living in Kunming, Yunnan Province. I like English and I am envious of people who can speak English well.  I hope one day I can be one of those people.  I love sports.

VERY GOOD!

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