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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I have studied English for 8 yeas , but my English is not influently. poor/influent
So I use this site to speak English very well.
One of my hobbies is runnning.
I run almost everyday as a practice of athletics.
Especially , my proud specialities item are 800m and 1500m.
The other my hobby that I love is to read??watch cartoons.
For example, "NARUTO","Fullmetal Alchemist"
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I have studied English for 8 years , but my English is not fluent enough.
That is why I use this site to improve my English proficiency.
One of my hobbies is runnning.
I run almost everyday for athletic practice.
Especially , I am very proud of my performances in 800m and 1500m events.
My another hobby is to read cartoons, such as "NARUTO" and "Fullmetal Alchemist".
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I have studied English for 8 yeas, but my English is not influently fluent.
So I (am going to) use this site to speak English very well. [Considering that you've just recently registered, using "to be going to" would be more logical]
One of my hobby hobbies is running. ["One of many", always single of plural]
I run almost everyday as (a) practice of athletics.
Especially, my proud item are 800m and 1500m. (My best records/lengths are 800m and 1500m.) [I'm not sure how to most accurately translate "proud items" here.]
The other my hobby is to read watch cartoons. [Or might it be "read manga"?]
For example, "NARUTO", "Fullmetal Alchemist"
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