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Please translate my poem from my note, "I Love Rain"
I tried to translate but I lost a the rhyming ((
It is extremely difficult to preserve the rhyming in the translated language without destroying the exact wording/meaning of the poem. If you want rhyming, then you need first to decide on the key word to be rhymed. From there, change accordingly. It is better to convey the sentiment than to have perfect rhyming. I can only correct your English and rhythm. I don't know Russian :(
Autumn - So much in so simple a word. In this word so much life.
Not only 'tis the season but also a three months capriceious.
Someone sees in Autumn it as the time of loneliness,
Someone Others - as sleet and a time of rain time,
But all people to everyone..., always want
Good to be needed for have someone near body
in During these grey ol' days.
Thanks a lot you so much for your attention!
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