Can someone correct this for me, please? My boss asked me to write this mail for him.
Dear Prof. Smith,
It is already the start of term in Taiwan, yet the summer heat has not left! I hope that you had a good summer in Canada.
Thank you for your last message concerning your article on Freedom of Religion. You mentioned that you were finishing it. I would like to know if this article has already been sent to the editors or should it take a little more time. Our editors wish to receive all articles before 20 September due to the editorial process. In case of any problem, please feel free to contact me or any of our editors.
Thank you again for your help.
With all good wishes
S.-H. Yan
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Dear Prof. Smith,
It is already the start of the term in Taiwan, yet the summer heat has not left! I hope that you had a good summer in Canada.
Thank you for your last message concerning your article on freedom of religion. You mentioned that you were finishing it. I would like to know if this article has already been sent to the editors or should it if it will take a little more time. Our editors wish to receive all articles before September 20th due to the editorial process. In case of any problem, (In case you have a problem,) please feel free to contact me or any of our editors.
Thank you again for your help.
With all good wishes (All the best,)
S.-H. Yan
In some places, I put a more natural sounding phrase in italics even if what you had wasn't technically wrong.
Hope that helps.
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