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Daniel's notebook entry: Sep 04, 2010, past sentence practice Yesterday it rained in the daytime, and it was so humid. I was so tired due to the bad weather for some days past. But it began to blow the cool wind around the evening, So I went to nearby park out of home to feel good getting the cool and fresh air outside. While I sat on the bench in the park, I saw few stars in the sky. Bright light coming from the building bothered me to see stars. I tried to look for where the the Big Dipper is, but I couldn't. I thought that it's impossible in city as I expected.

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Practice: Word order ---- Plurals ------ Past tense.
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Practice: Word order ---- Plurals ------ Past tense.
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Daniel's notebook entry: Sep 04, 2010, past sentence practice

Yesterday it rained during the morning < (tell time of day here if you know it) and it was so humid.

I was so tired because the bad weather had been bad for so long. '

But then, the cool wind
began to blow in the evening, so I went to nearby park to get out of  the house. 

It felt
good to be in the cool and fresh air outside.

While I sat on the bench in the park, I saw a few stars in the sky.

But the bright
lights that were coming from the buildings made the stars hard to see.

I tried to look for where the the Big Dipper was, but I couldn't see it.

As I expected,  I found it
impossible to see stars in the city. 
And I thought it was as I expected it to be.  It's impossible to see stars in the city.

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