Silent killer
It came slowly,
like a night murderer.
He took all what you had,
all what you love.
And you slept.
Slept with sweet-sweet
dream in which
everything will be fine.
But when sunrise come so closely,
you start feel,
that something missing you,
and it's definetely gone.
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Silent Killer [No one killed in the night. Perhaps "thief/theft" would be more appropriate. Silent killer means "died from heart attack"]
It came slowly,
like a night murderer in/of the night,
He took Taking/Robbing all what that you had have/own,
And all what that you love.
And while/as you slept,
Slept with In such sweet-sweet dreams,
dream in which dreaming that
Everything will be is fine.
But when the sunrise creeps along, come so closely,
You start to feel,
That something is missing you,
And it's definitely gone.
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