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劳动节 - Labor Day
大家好,好久没不写了。
昨天是美国的劳动节。所以,上个周末我们休息了三天。
那上周末我太忙了;周五晚上我参加 Enrique Iglesias 和 Jennifer Lopez的 音乐会, 你认识他们吗?(我知道Jennifer Lopez :))
周六晚上,我跟一些朋友出去海滩, 我们听音乐,喝啤酒,打排球, 和游泳。
星期天,我跟我女朋友出去中国超市买中国菜和水果。在超市旁边有一个有名的点心店酒家(点心和酒家放在一起太奇怪了),在那儿,个酒家我们吃了午饭。
周一,我打算烤肉,但是可惜天气不好,整天下雨,所以我们出去购物中心的电影院看电影。
今天早上,我感觉很懒,闹钟响了,我都起上不了床。
Hello everyone, I haven't written in a while.
Yesterday was America's Labor day. So, last weekend we had three days off.
I was really busy this weekend; Friday night, I went to an Enrique Iglesias and Jennifer Lopez's concert. Do you know who they are?
Saturday night, some friends and I went to the beach to listen to music, drink beer, play volleyball, and swim.
Sunday, my girlfriend and I went to a Chinese Supermarket in order to buy Chinese fruits and vegetable. Next to the Supermarket, there is a popular dim sum place, where we ate lunch.
On Monday, I was planning to have a BBQ, but the weather was awful and it rained the whole day. So, we went to the mall's movie theater and we watched a movie.
This morning, I felt so lazy that when the alarm rang, I could not get out of bed.
劳动节 - Labor Day
大家好,好久没写。
昨天是美国的劳动节。所以,上个周末我们休息了三天。
这个周末我太忙了;周五晚上我参加 Enrique Iglesias 和 Jennifer Lopez的 音乐会, 你认识他们吗?
周六晚上,我跟一些朋友出去海滩玩。我们在海滩听音乐,喝啤酒,打排球, 和游泳。
星期天,我跟我女朋友出去中国超市买中国菜和水果。在超市旁边有一家有名的点心酒家,在那间酒家我们吃了午饭。
周一,我打算烧烤,但是可惜天气不好,整天下雨,所以我们出去购物中心的电影院看电影。
今天早上,我感觉很懒,当闹钟响了, 起不了床。
Hello everyone, I haven't written in a while.
Yesterday was America's Labor day. So, last weekend we had three days off.
I was really busy this weekend; Friday night, I went to an Enrique Iglesias and Jennifer Lopez's concert. Do you know who they are?
Saturday night, some friends and I went to the beach to listen to music, drink beer, play volleyball, and swim.
Sunday, my girlfriend and I went to a Chinese Supermarket in order to buy Chinese fruits and vegetable. Next to the Supermarket, there is a popular dim sum place, where we ate lunch.
On Monday, I was planning to have a BBQ, but the weather was awful and it rained the whole day. So, we went to the mall's movie theater and we watched a movie.
This morning, I felt so lazy that when the alarm rang, I could not get out of bed.
劳动节 - Labor Day
大家好,好久不(沒)写了。
昨天是美国的劳动节。所以,上个周末我们休息了三天。
那(上)周末我太忙了;(:)周五晚上我参加 Enrique Iglesias 和 Jennifer Lopez的 音乐会, 你认识他们吗?
周六晚上,我跟一些朋友出去(去了)海滩, 听音乐,喝啤酒,打排球, 和游泳。
星期天(周日),我跟我女朋友出去(到)中国超市买中国菜和水果。在超市旁边有一个有名的点心酒家,在那个酒家我们吃了午饭。 (用星期天也沒有錯, 不過Sat. 和 Mon. 都用"周"六、"周"一, 因此文章用詞最好統一)
周一,我打算烤肉,但是可惜天气不好,整天下雨,所以我们出去购物中心的电影院看电影。
今天早上,我感觉(or 覺得)很懒(or 懶散),当闹钟响了, (卻)上(下)不了床。
Hello everyone, I haven't written in a while.
Yesterday was America's Labor day. So, last weekend we had three days off.
I was really busy this weekend; Friday night, I went to an Enrique Iglesias and Jennifer Lopez's concert. Do you know who they are?
Saturday night, some friends and I went to the beach to listen to music, drink beer, play volleyball, and swim.
Sunday, my girlfriend and I went to a Chinese Supermarket in order to buy Chinese fruits and vegetable. Next to the Supermarket, there is a popular dim sum place, where we ate lunch.
On Monday, I was planning to have a BBQ, but the weather was awful and it rained the whole day. So, we went to the mall's movie theater and we watched a movie.
This morning, I felt so lazy that when the alarm rang, I could not get out of bed.
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