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A life with a load of people at home.
My family and home are really big alike. When there're many people in a same place you can feel so small in it. Kids running around, grow ones talking and talking..etc. I have my own room but It's not big at all. Nevertheless, I know firsthand that It's better than being lonely without loved ones around you, but I'm considering one point: it's better but not always!! This is not to say, I should go home forever, It's to say I should have my own place. Most of my brothers and sister are already adults but they haven't made (started) a family of their own life yet. They always say: "It's better to stay here with our loved ones than away and going to visit them once in a while". I respect their thoughts, but I do not share the same feeling. I want to build my own life. I'll not forget them and I will go to visit them always. I desire to achieve many things (tu puedes usar 'stuff' pero 'things' suena mejor), ?that's why life is for?.
A life with a lot of people at home.
My family and home are really alike. When there's many people in a same pleace you can feel so small in it. Kids running around, grown ones talking and talking..etc. I have my own room, but It's not big at all. Nevertheless, I know firsthand that it's better than being lonly without loved ones around you, but I'm considering one point: it's better but not always!! This is not to say, I should go home forever. It's to say I should have my own place. Most of my brothers and sisters are already adults but they haven't made a family in their own life yet. They always say: "It's better stay here with our loved ones than away and going to visit them once in a while". I respect their thoughts, but I don't share the same feeling. I want to build my own life. I'll never forget them and I will go to visit them always. I desire to achieve many stuff, that's what life is for.
A life with a load of peaople at home.
My family and home are really big alike. When there're are ("They're" sounds strange here and contractions are generally only used during speech, not writing) many people in a the same pleace you can feel so small in it. Kids running around, grownups ones talking and talking..etc. I have my own room but it's not big at all. Nevertheless, I know firsthand that it's better than being lonely without loved ones around you, but I'm considering one point: it's better but not always!! This is not to say, I should go home forever, it's to say that I should have my own place. Most of my brothers and sister are already adults but they haven't maken started/formed a family of their own life yet. They always say: "It's better to stay here with your loved ones than to go away and going to visit them once in a while". I respect their thoughts, but I'm not share don't share the same feeling. I want to build my own life. I'll I will not forget them and I will always go to visit them always. I desire want to achieve many stuffs things, that's what life is for.
A life with a load of people at home.
My family and home are really alot alike. When there's many people in the same pleace you can feel so small in it. Kids running around, grown ones talking and talking..etc. I have my own room but It's not big at all. Nevertheless, I know firsthand that It's better than being lonely without loved ones around you, but I'm considering it at one point: it's better, but not always!! This is not to say, I should go home forever, It's to say, "I should have my own place." Most of my brothers and sister are already adults but they haven't maken a family or their own life yet. They always say: "It's better, stay here with our loved ones than go away and coming to visit them once in a while". I respect their thoughts, but I'm not sharing the same feeling. I want to start my own life. I'll not forget them and I will go to visit them always. I desire to achieve many things, that's what life is for.
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