0901 : Diary
First day of September! Time flies. I met my friend "K" today, who has been my friend since we were 17. We talked about our future, especially how to deal with our lives..... youth unemployment is not just other people's business, anyway. Although "K" and I earn money, we are part time workers. In Korea, it is quite tough to get a full time job. I think this is not only the serious problem in Korean society but in the whole world. Solution for that? Well.... we could not find it although we discussed for 3 hrs about that. Just be positive, have a hope, try my best. That is only way to deal with that, I guess.
BTW, it was a lovely cake.
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0901 : Diary
First day of September! Time flies. I met my friend "K" today, who has been my friend since we were 17. We talked about our future, more specifically about how we should deal with our lives..... Youth unemployment is not just other people's business, anyway. Although "K" and I earn money, we are part time workers. In Korea, it is quite tough to get a full time job. I feel that this is a serious problem in not only Korean society, but also the rest of the world. What's the solution for that?
Well.... we could not find it even though we discussed it for 3 hours. Just be positive, have hope, and I will try my best. That is only way to deal with it, I guess.
BTW, it was a lovely cake.
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The part highlighted in red - I'm not really sure what you are trying to say therefore I didn't correct it.
I'm a native English, and have lived in London all my life. I hope that I have helped :)
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