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TV series?
Well,I just finish watching Sherlock.It has been so popular recently,at least in China.Lots of my classmates are crazy about it.Brain is the new sexy.That's true.So I guess this is why this kind of genius becomes popular so easily.Oh I just think of Sheldon in the Big Bang,another fantastic show!
And I would never forget the Vampire Diary.Nina and Ian,they are lovers in real life,right?Okay,September is coming soon and I just can't wait to see the Episode 4.Will Klause and Caroline be together?
Okay,it's still a little bit hot in Hangzhou,China.The new term is coming soon.
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TV series?
Well, I {[just finished] or [am currently]} watching Sherlock. It has been so popular recently, at least in China. Lots of my classmates are crazy about it. Brain is the new sexy. That's true. So I guess this is why this kind of genius becomes popular so easily. Oh I just think of Sheldon in the Big Bang, another fantastic show!
And I would never forget the Vampire Diary. Nina and Ian, they are lovers in the real life, right? Okay, September is coming soon and I just can't wait to see the Episode 4. Will Klause and Caroline be together?
Okay, it's still a little bit hot in Hangzhou, China. The new term is coming soon.
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