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I am twenty years old a 20-year-old-girl who have always been trying to follow my conscience in every single thing I did.  have done. There is a The quote that says “just let your conscience be your guide for you”,. It pretty much describes my personality a lot. For me, conscience is the voice of God’s voices, and it must be trained day by day. Yes, I have to train it, because it’s is not easy to separate between from my ego which is what I want.  (what my brain says – what I want) and my conscience (what my heart says – God’s words). By following my conscience can make me I am different from others as I can be the real me, and I don’t I can be me by not need to following the crowd.

My conscience has been leading guided me to be a hard worker working person. Actually, I'm am not a clever girl; , I'm weak in logical thinking. If others only need 1 hour to understand logical matters, I need double time to understand such things. would do 2 hours to learn it.. Yeah, that's the only way to solve my weakness. But, I have got 1 profit from that, I could train my self-control (control my discipline, emotion and patience) The only thing that gets me going is my will power to maintain self control.  That's is why my friends notice find me as a mature girl.

Because of My perseverance and keeping a cool head, I was made a project leader and & my self-control, my organization's friends ask me to be their team in some projects. Moreover, I have given a position as a division coordinator in 2 for two organizations also in some like those projects like I have mentioned it in on pages 5 five. Here I learnted how to work in a team; how I must able to respect the opinions of others; how to be an innovative & and creative person, and finally, how to be a good leader.

Besides education and organization, I also persevere in joining paper competition. Making Writing papers can increases my knowledge which I couldn't find it in my that I cannot find in my formal education. Also, I can learn how to find the creative problem-solving. That's why I don't care too much whether I will win or not. I always have a big spirit to get the new experience and knowledge. Besides, I write to learn how to solve problems and not by winning in a competition.

The other Another thing that I love also is graphic design. For me, life without art is a life without self-expression. I'm I am a freelance graphic designer in my spare time. I have ever designed did many organization & and company profiles, campus brochures,  agenda, poster (for organization projects), invitations, name cards, etc. and brochure. Here I can learn how to manage time as good as possible, how to understand my client needs & how to satisfy them, and further how to increase my creativity & mentality.

You need to write precisely and to the point.  However, you are getting there by having the courage to write and be corrected.  This is the only way to learn.