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Today's memory 21/8/2012 It came back from the travel to Japan today.It has been to Singapore and Malaysia.The airplane was changed in Hong Kong at midnight 1:00.I'm very very tired.but when i was arrive in Narita Airport...The incident occurred!!!Lost baggege!My family into only me!haha Since the telephone came from the airport even if found a while ago in Hong Kong, it was good. Have a good night. Please checked this my sentence. シンガポールとマレーシアに行って来ました。マレーシアはラマダンの時期で、シンガポールはハッピーバースデーでお祝いが多かったかなあ(^^♪とにかく楽しい家族旅行になりました~!日本帰ってきたら、まさかの私だけ荷物届かなくてふどうしようかと思ったよね(笑)ま、香港に無事にあったそうで明日空港から送ってもらえるからよし! てか、マレーシア鉄道に乗った時、インド人の女の人が電車走ってる途中なのに降りちゃって、電車に挟まって大事件になった。すごくこわかったし、びっくりしたなあ。ガイドさんがすごくいい人でした!シンガポールはMRTに乗って、弟とふらついた~(*^^)v治安いいから、ある程度気をつければいいんだね! 今回の旅で、英語くらい話せないとだめだ!と、思ったのでさっそくがんばってみる!(*^_^*) 久しぶりの日本はいいね!明日はバイト!朝起きないと!おやすみ~!(^^)!

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Today's memory 21/8/2012

I came back from a travel to Japan today.It has been to Singapore and Malaysia.The airplane was changed in Hong Kong at midnight 1:00.I'm very very tired.but when i was arrived to Narita Airport...The incident happened!!!i've Lost my baggage!My family into only me!haha
Since the airport phoned me about my lost baggage,  even though i found it a while ago in Hong Kong,but it was good.

Have a good night.

Please checked this my sentence.

シンガポールとマレーシアに行って来ました。マレーシアはラマダンの時期で、シンガポールはハッピーバースデーでお祝いが多かったかなあ(^^♪とにかく楽しい家族旅行になりました~!日本帰ってきたら、まさかの私だけ荷物届かなくてふどうしようかと思ったよね(笑)ま、香港に無事にあったそうで明日空港から送ってもらえるからよし!
てか、マレーシア鉄道に乗った時、インド人の女の人が電車走ってる途中なのに降りちゃって、電車に挟まって大事件になった。すごくこわかったし、びっくりしたなあ。ガイドさんがすごくいい人でした!シンガポールはMRTに乗って、弟とふらついた~(*^^)v治安いいから、ある程度気をつければいいんだね!
今回の旅で、英語くらい話せないとだめだ!と、思ったのでさっそくがんばってみる!(*^_^*)

久しぶりの日本はいいね!明日はバイト!朝起きないと!おやすみ~!(^^)!

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Sorry that my comments are in English... 疲れています。 (-_-;)

 

It came back from the travel to Japan today.

When you arrange words in this order, it seems that your baggage was having a trip to Japan, not came back there =)

It came back to Japan from the travel today.


It has been to Singapore and Malaysia.

この文は荷物についてですか?


The airplane was changed in Hong Kong at midnight 1:00.

Midnight is 00:00...

 

I'm very very tired.but when i was arrive in Narita Airport...The incident occurred!!!

I was (we are still talking about past) very very tired. But when I was arriving in Narita Airport...The incident occurred!!!


Lost baggege!My family into only me!haha

"Lost baggage!" is comprehensible but in this context "I lost the baggage" or "Baggage was lost!" would be better. "My family into only me" 分かりません (・_・ヾ What do you mean?


Since the telephone came from the airport even if found a while ago in Hong Kong, it was good.

"telephone" (or just "phone") is just a device. You need to call through it. I'm most probably understood this sentence wrong, but I guess you meant this:
After the the phone call from the airport that it was found a while ago in Hong Kong, all became well.

or this: (゜-゜)

I received a telephone call about it after I had already found (past perfect tense here) it in Hong Kong, but it was good nevertheless.


A good start though. 頑張ってくださいね!

英語母国語を話す人ではありません。でも、私は役に立ちました願っています。

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