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Hello everybody~
This is the first time for me to I have used Italki,a website be used to communicate with foreigners. I feel excited 'cause my English would be will improved. I am a student who comes from China [more natural: ". . . a student from China", or "a Chinese student"], and I like English very much, because it can be use worldwide/widely [more natural to use one of the two]. By learning English, I can [or: ". . . will be able to"] meet so many [more natural: ". . . a lot of"] lovely friends, chat with them, and exchange the culture of each other's country [possibly more natural: "exchange cultures"]. That's interesting. And maybe I will [I'm not sure what you wanted to say exactly, but perhaps: ". . . I will be able to" works better] study abroad to [and] live up my dream in the future.
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Hi =) First off, not so bad at all. If you have any questions about the edits, I'd be happy to send a more comprehensive message including details as to precisely why I'd change what I would. Otherwise, I hope these changes are helpful! Happy studying. =)
P.S.: Thanks for the corrects~~~
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