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Hello everybody~ This is the first time for me to use Italki,a website be used to communicate with foreigners.I feel excited cause my English would be improved.I am a student comes from China,I like English very much,because it can be use worldwide widely.By learning English,I can meet so many lovely friends,chat with them and exchange the culture of each other's country.That's interesting.And maybe I will study abroad to live up my dream in the future.

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Hello everybody~

This is the first time for me to I have used Italki,a website be used to communicate with foreigners. I feel excited 'cause my English would be will improved. I am a student who comes from China [more natural: ". . . a student from China", or "a Chinese student"], and I like English very much, because it can be use worldwide/widely [more natural to use one of the two]. By learning English, I can [or: ". . . will be able to"] meet so many [more natural: ". . . a lot of"] lovely friends, chat with them, and exchange the culture of each other's country [possibly more natural: "exchange cultures"]. That's interesting. And maybe I will [I'm not sure what you wanted to say exactly, but perhaps: ". . . I will be able to" works better] study abroad to [and] live up my dream in the future.

 

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Hi =) First off, not so bad at all. If you have any questions about the edits, I'd be happy to send a more comprehensive message including details as to precisely why I'd change what I would. Otherwise, I hope these changes are helpful! Happy studying. =)

P.S.: Thanks for the corrects~~~ 

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