Hello Raghad,

I decided to correct this entry. Your message to your friend is truly touching and I hate to be correcting it but you will learn English better like this.

Green - explanation

Orange - a word that I think you should have in the text

Red - correction

I hope this is helpful to you.

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Mmessage to my best friend

( I wish you would have stayed stay with me for the next 30 Eid and even more in my life. I love (?)sins(?) (what do you mean by this?) I’m a kid and I will loves U you (you should always be formal in such serious messages) until I will be am underground . Aall my love . )


This is my message to my best friend the day of Eid. I hope you will correct my mistakes.