Live in China

Hello ,everyone. My name is Eric, and I am a Chinese student who is 22 years old [or: "I am a 22 year old student from China", either way]. I have lived in TIANJIN city for two years.

I study at graduate two school n a college in TIANJIN* [要是你的意思是“我是二年级的研究学生”，你就该说：“I'm a second year graduate student at a college in Tianjin"].I am majoring in [or: "My major is . . . ] Mechanical Manufacturing and Automation. And I hope to be an engineer in five years [perhaps: "I hope to finish in five years" sounds better].

I will work hard.

besides, That aside/In addition, I am really interested in English and wanna learn it well, so I attended a school (a company which is founded by Chinese and foreigners) where I can could learn English from a foreign teacher [or: ". . . from foreign teachers"]. I have improved a lot since I studied at there. I wanna make a lot of friends all over the world.

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