오토바이 여행

오늘은 날씨 좋네요 그래서 오토바이를 여행 갔어요.

오늘은 날씨가 좋았어요. 그래서 오토바이로 여행 갔어요.

-네요 : interjection / using past tense is more natural here.

-로 : by -

산에서 많은 사람들 있었어요.

산에 많은 사람들 있었어요.  

'-에' and '-에서' are similar but

'-에서' is used when;

1. the place is where something is happening

2. the place is where something starts

3. the place is a source of something

while '-에' simply indicates a place. So -에 is more natural in this sentence.

오늘은 더 워 예요. 그리고 차를 깨었어요.

오늘은 평소보다 더 더웠어요. 그리고 차들이 고장났어요.

평소보다 더 --하다 : It's more -- than usual

고장나다 : be broken down / 깨다 : to break (something like glass)

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What I wanted to say :

The weather is good today so I went on a motorcycle trip.

There were a lot of people in the mountains.

Today is hotter than usual and cars broke down.