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About English Writing Sometimes I need to write 400words for homework.However,I don't know how to write so much words about the article.For example,if I am Chris.needs to write a letter to Paul ,who takes drug and don't go to school.Which areas should I write about it?such as family will worried. Hope someone can help me!

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Sometimes I need to write a four hundred 400 words essay for homework.__However,_I don't do not know how to write in so so much many words about the article.__For example,_if I am Chris.who needs to write a letter to Paul,_who takes is an drug addict and don't go to is skipping school.__Which areas should I write about it? such as Worries of the family? will worried.

Hope someone can help advise me!

 

My advice: Write in Cantonese or Mandarin and then translate it! If you cannot write about it in your native language, don't expect to be able to write in English either.  This way you have more than 400 hundred words!  My comments are informal and hence do not follow the strict format as in how I corrected in your essay which I consider as a piece of formal writing.

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