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SONNET ON SEPARATION - Vinicius de Moraes Suddenly laughter became sobbing Silent and white like the mist And united mouths became foam And upturned hands became astonished. Suddenly the calm became the wind That extinguished the last flame in the eye And passion became foreboding And the still moment became drama. Suddenly, no more than suddenly He who'd become a lover became sad And he who'd become content became lon The near became the distant friend Life became a vagrant venture Suddenly, no more than suddenly. De repente do riso fez-se o pranto Silencioso e branco como a bruma E das bocas unidas fez-se a espuma E das mãos espalmadas fez-se o espanto. De repente da calma fez-se o vento Que dos olhos desfez a última chama E da paixão fez-se o pressentimento E do momento imóvel fez-se o drama. De repente, não mais que de repente Fez-se de triste o que se fez amante E de sozinho o que se fez contente Fez-se do amigo próximo o distante Fez-se da vida uma aventura errante De repente, não mais que de repente.

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SONNET ON SEPARATION - Vinicius de Moraes

Suddenly laughter became sobbing
Silent and white like the mist
And united mouths became foam
And upturned hands became astonished.

Suddenly the calm became the wind
That extinguished the last flame in the eye
And passion became foreboding
And the still moment became drama.

Suddenly, no more than suddenly
He who'd become a lover became sad
And he who'd become content became lon

The near became the distant friend
Life became a vagrant venture
Suddenly, no more than suddenly.

De repente do riso fez-se o pranto
Silencioso e branco como a bruma
E das bocas unidas fez-se a espuma
E das mãos espalmadas fez-se o espanto.

De repente da calma fez-se o vento
Que dos olhos desfez a última chama
E da paixão fez-se o pressentimento
E do momento imóvel fez-se o drama.

De repente, não mais que de repente
Fez-se de triste o que se fez amante
E de sozinho o que se fez contente

Fez-se do amigo próximo o distante
Fez-se da vida uma aventura errante
De repente, não mais que de repente.

 

The English here beyond perfection. 

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Beautiful poem, and it seems like a good translation. I had never heard of this poet! I wish my Portuguese was better, so that I could make suggestions to improve the translation.

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