Corrections · 6
_ one space
__ two spaces
所有的 'i' (我) 必須要用大字來寫.不許有例外!
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I want to improve my English,_because I do am in international business.__I My company exports many kinds of apparel,_including costumes for mascots costumes,_handbags,_shoes, and etc.__My hobbies include dancing and ,_singing.__I wish to make friends with you! [I prefer, "Nice making friends with you."]
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I want to improve my English, because i do international business. I export clothing, costumes, handbags, shoes, and etc. My hobbies include dancing and singing. I hope to make friends with you!
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I want to improve my English,because i do international business.I export apparel,mascot costumes,bags,shoes and etc.My hobbies include dancing,singing.wish make friends with you!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I want to improve my English because I do international business. I export apparel, mascot costumes, bags, shoes, etc. My hobbies include dancing and singing. Hope to make friends with you!
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