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深夜在我的后花园 我非常喜欢我的后花园,特别是在晚上。附近花园的尽头有一个花架,小蝴蝶型五颜六色灯火是在花架的洞穿过的。灯火每隔分钟会变换颜色,灯火在黑暗中如此漂亮地闪烁。在花圃里也有许多灯火。后花园的后面有一个小树林,你可以听到从树林传来很多的动物的啼叫。狐狸,鹿,獾,而且当然鸟都住在这个树林!我的花园里有很多种植物,灌木,蔬菜,水果树,还有竹子。深夜在我的后花园很让人放松,几乎有治疗作用的。我很喜欢坐在有遮盖的长椅上看书。 I really like my back garden, especially at night. Near the end of the garden there is a trellis, small butterfly-shaped multi coloured lights are threaded through the holes in the trellis. Every few minutes the lights change colour, The lights flickering beautifully in the dark. There are lots of lights in the flowerbeds too. There is a small wood behind the garden, you can hear the cry of a lot of animals coming from the woods. Fox, deer, badgers, and of course birds all live in the wood! There are many types of plants in my garden, shrubs, vegetables, fruit trees, even bamboo. It is very relaxing in my back garden at night, almost therapeutic. I like sitting on the arbour seat reading a book.

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深夜在我的后花园

我非常喜欢我的后花园,特别是在晚上。附近花园的尽头有一个花架,穿过花架的灯光呈现出五颜六色的小蝴蝶型。这些小蝴蝶隔不几分钟会变换颜色,它们在黑暗中如此漂亮地闪烁。在花圃里也有许多灯光。后花园的后面有一个小树林,你可以听到从树林里传来的很多动物的啼叫声。狐狸,鹿,獾,当然还有住在这个树林里的所有鸟!我的花园里有很多种植物,灌木,蔬菜,水果树,还有竹子。深夜的后花园真的很让我放松,几乎有治疗作用的。我很喜欢坐在有遮盖的长椅上看书。 (It doesn't have to translate word for word, and it is more important to comply with the habit of thinking of Chinese language and cultural identity.)

I really like my back garden, especially at night. Near the end of the garden there is a trellis, small butterfly-shaped multi coloured lights are threaded through the holes in the trellis. Every few minutes the lights change colour, The lights flickering beautifully in the dark. There are lots of lights in the flowerbeds too. There is a small wood behind the garden, you can hear the cry of a lot of animals coming from the woods. Fox, deer, badgers, and of course birds all live in the wood! There are many types of plants in my garden, shrubs, vegetables, fruit trees, even bamboo. It is very relaxing in my back garden at night, almost therapeutic. I like sitting on the arbour seat reading a book.

 

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我非常喜欢我的后花园,特别是在晚上。附近花园的尽头有一个花架,小蝴蝶型五颜六色灯火是在花架的洞穿过的。灯火每隔分钟会变换颜色,灯火在黑暗中如此漂亮地闪烁。在花圃里也有许多灯火。后花园的后面有一个小树林,你可以听到从树林传来很多的动物的啼叫。狐狸,鹿,獾,而且当然鸟都住在这个树林!我的花园里有很多种植物,灌木,蔬菜,水果树,还有竹子。深夜在我的后花园很让人放松,几乎有治疗作用的。我很喜欢坐在有遮盖的长椅上看书。

 

--> 我非常喜欢我的后花园,特别是晚上。花园尽头有一个花架,五颜六色的蝴蝶形小灯穿过花架上的孔连成一串。灯火每隔几分钟变换一次颜色,在漆黑的夜里闪烁出靓丽的光彩。在花圃中也有许多灯火。花园后边有一个小树林,树林中经常传出动物们的啼叫。狐狸,鹿,灌,当然还有小鸟都生活在这里!花园里还有各种各样的植物,有灌木丛,蔬菜,果树,甚至还有竹子。深夜置身花园就像做了一次理疗,让人身心愉悦。我喜欢坐在凉亭里看书。

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