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Daydream OR Plan???
As a girl,I often think of some things supposed to take place in the future when I have nothing to do. For example, I ofen think about what kind of style should be used in my future house, what the animals i should keep, and even what plants i should buy to decorate my future house and my future life. I even think that maybe one day i can take a very healthy and cute dog or cat to travel with me if I decide to be single forever.
Honestly,I don't know these fancy things r sort of plans or just daydream!
Very good job :) 很好 Marvilloso, Muito bem!
Corrected text:
A Daydream Or a Plan??? ( Daydream or Plan? )
As a young woman, when I have idle (spare) time, I often day dream and ponder ( think about ) potential events of my life in the future. think of some things supposed to take place in the future when I have nothing to do. For example, I often think about what style of house I would want. ( The use of the subjunctive " would" communicates that something is possible. Such as a future house.) what kind of style should be used in my future house, What the animals i should keep, pets would I have? (Note: domesticated animals that you posess and care for, such as dogs, cats, birds, fish, hamsters, rabbits, etc ( etcetera ) are referred to as pets. An animal that is considered to be exotic or wild would be referred to as an animal.) and even what Which plants I should buy to decorate my future house and my future life. I even think that maybe one day i can take a very healthy and cute dog or cat to travel with me if I decide to be single forever.
Honestly, I don't know these fancy things am not familiar with these luxuries in my current life, I just ponder and daydream!
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