First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my name is Olyvia. I'm learning English because I want to be able to speak fluently and making friends with everyone. My native language is Bahasa Indonesia and I grew up in Indonesia, I enjoy swimming, travelling, chatting, eating and especially shopping.... ;)

The basic of learning the language is how can we understand others, from this point we can start pick up some attention for tenses, punctuality, and style. Above is my correction based on what I learned, what do you think ?

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

halo....my name is olyvia...i'm learning english because i want to speak fluently and make friends with anyone...my native language is indonesian and i grew up in indonesia....i enjoy swimming,travelling,chatting, eating, especially shopping.... ; )

Hi Olyvia :) I like the spelling of your name, I haven't seen it that way before.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

halo....Hello, my name is Olyvia...i I'm learning English because I want to speak it fluently and make firendsfriends with anyone....* My native language is Indonesian and I grew up in Indonesia.... I enjoy swimming, travelling, chatting, eating, and especially shopping.... ; )

*If you say "make friends with anyone" it sounds incorrect here.  "Make friends" by itself is OK by itself, because logically it would be with people. Anyways "anyone" is not really the right word in this case. Well done aside from that , good luck with your learning!