I want to be !
Cooking !
I want to be one of those women who can cook, with a wink they prepare for you the most dilicious meals.
(I don't like to smile, who wants to look like children. But If you like to see the smile with a wink, so it is).
There are many problems getting on my way to achieve my dream, oignons, and I can't stay in a kitchen more than two hours, I feel life goes behind my back.
Another problem, none can trust me here, if it ever happens that I start to cook, my mom gets so horrified, like she saw Samarra from "The ring" in her kitchen.
You don't know how much I like it when people cook for me. the neighbours, and my mom's friend spoil me.
Would you like me to cook for you? Bon appétit.
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I want to be !
Cooking !
I want to be one of those women who can cook., wWith a wink, they prepare for you the most dilicious delicious meals. (I would make this into two sentences to add emphasis to what you are saying)
(I don't like to smile, who wants to look like a childchildren?But If you like to see the smile with a wink, so it is).
There are many problems getting on in my way to achieve of achieving my dream,: oignons onions, and I can't stay in a kitchen for more than two hours, I feel life goes on (or..life continues...)behind my back.
Another problem, noone can trust me here in the kitchen., Iif it ever happens that I start to cook, my mom gets so horrified, like she saw has seen Samarra from "The ring" in her kitchen. (I would change the verb tense here so that it agrees with the rest of your sentence.)
You don't know how much I like it when people cook for me. the neighbours, and my mom's friend spoil me.
Would you like me to cook for you? Bon appétit.
I always enjoy reading your take on things. :) It is refreshing.
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Cooking is not that much difficult but i hear that there is more taste in the hand of men rather then women. And 2nd you can win any person heart by cooking dilicious meals.
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i think there cooking is the best thing i like to do it but you should be patient in cooking and take it like an art you cook and you play don't think about eating
i like cooking so muchhhhhh
thanks for this subject
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Sarah, it is amazing indeed :))
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I'd like to be like those women as you said. :) only prepare different kind of delicious foods by a wink:D it is amazing, isn't it?
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