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Time changes people... There is nothing better than to go back to where nothing hasn't changed to understand how changed you by yourself... P.S Among all of you time didn't change only us... Yeah..maybe you can't imagine yourself this or understand my great words...unfortunately( why??? Because you have changed by this great thing like TIME!! Do you say it's impossible? Why? You've said : Impossible is possible..So did I!! You will remember my words..But I'm afraid it will be too late to correct...

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Time changes people...


There is nothing better than to go back to where nothing hasn't something has changed to understand how you changed you by yourself on your own...
P.S Among For all of you time didn't isn't the only thing that changed only us you...
Yeah..maybe you can't imagine yourself in this way or understand my great words...unfortunately( why??? Because you have changed by due to this great thing called like TIME!! Do you say it's impossible? Why? You've said : the impossible is possible..So did have I!! You will remember my words..But I'm afraid it will be too late to correct the situation...

Correction Notes
1) Using a double negative to explain a positive is not done in English. Technically, you can say "I didn't not read the book", but that is confusing. Say "I read the book". "Nothing hasn't changed" means the same as "Something has changed." Say the latter.

2) In your 2nd sentence, "us" is a 1st person plural pronoun, like "мы". You are speaking to a 2nd person plural group, "you", or "вы". In referencing this group, you cannot switch pronouns. If you are a member of the group you are talking about, it is "us" 1st person plural, if you are not, it is "you" plural 2nd person.

3) Honestly, it's hard to understand what you are talking about in this notebook entry, what point you are trying to get across.

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Thank you very much! I'm really glad to hear this words from you! (espesially from teacher like you!))
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I really enjoyed reading this and thinking about it. I will say that in your first line, it should be: "back to where nothing has changed", not nothing hasn't changed.
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Time changes people...


There is nothing better to do than to go back to where nothing hasn't changed to understand how much you changed you by yourself...


P.S Among all of you time didn't change only us...

Rewrite this sentence.

Many of you were not changed by time.


Yeah..maybe you can't imagine yourself this or understand my great words...unfortunately(

 

Why??? Because you have been changed by this great thing that is like TIME!!

 

Do you say it's impossible? Why?

 

You've said : Impossible is possible..So did I!!

 

You will remember my words..But I'm afraid it will be too late to correct...

 

Maybe use another word instead of "correct."

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