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Title: Some people think that the government should pay for citizen’s health care and education. Others however, argue that is not the government's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age, the guarantee of individual's health care and education has aroused people's discussion. Some people believe that it is definitely the duty of the government. From my point, I agree with this view.

Paying for people’s health care and education by government benefits citizenship to a large extent. Every student could enjoy the right to go to school no matter the high tuition. The impoverished students can attend school to receive the education provided by the government that will increase its support for pulic education. The needy can receive the free medical service which is beneficial to their health. Besides, the government is obligated to increase their expenditure on citizen's medical service and schooling. Individuals take the responsibility to contribute to the development of the society and pay taxes to the national government. So it is free for them to receive the education and take the medical service. Last but not least, the service will narrow the gap between the poor and the rich. By that I mean students raised in less fortunate households can acquire knowledge and techiniques at school which will motivate them to change their future.

People can pay for health care and education independently. After all , the government can put more budgets on other fileds. For instance, the service industry, the manufacture etc. which make great profit to the national tax rather than education and health care. Even so, the education and health care is the basic guarantee of citizenship which play the majority roles in the progress of the economy.

In conclusion, government is obligated to take responsibility to assist people’s health care and education.

Some people think that the government should pay for citizen’s health care and education. Others , however ,argue that is not the responsibly of the government . discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age, the guarantee of an individual's health care and education has aroused popular discussion. Some people believe that it is definitely the duty of the government. From my standpoint, I agree with this view.

Paying for people’s health care and education by government can greatly boost citizenship. To begin with, every student could enjoy the right to go to school no matter how poor they are. The impoverished students can attend school to receive the education provided that the government will increase its support for public education. Similarly, the needy can receive medical services free of charge, which will improve the population's health. Besides, the government shoud be obligated to increase their expenditure on their citizens’ health and education. More preciously, individuals shoulder the responsibility of contributing to societal development through paying taxation. So it is free for them to receive the education and take the medical service. Last but not least, the service will narrow the gap between the poor and the rich. By that I mean students raised in less fortunate households can acquire knowledge and techiniques at school which motivate them to change their destiny. This is probably true to some extent.

Admittedly, persons can pay for the health care and education by themselves. After all, the government could focus its budget on other areas. For instance, the manufacturing industry, which can generate taxation revenue through taxation  rather than investing in education and health care. Even so, the education and health care is a basic guarantee of citizenship which plays the majority of roles in the progress of an economy .

In conclusion, the government should be obligated to take the responsibility to assist people’s health care and education. But I still suggest that it is critical for the government to control the level of spending on these areas.