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Introducing Myself
Hello,everyone. I am Jennifer. I am very glad to be here to introduce myself to you all, and I sincerely hope we can be friends. I come from Xi'an,a very beautiful and ancient city. I am a diligent person especially with the things I am interested in. I will try my best to finish something no matter how difcult it is. In my spare time, I like tourism, swimming, and other outdoor sports and so on. Also English is my favorite, but there aren't enough chances to practice my oral english. So I really hope I can make friends that come from diffierent countries ,and we will learn speaking and writing skills together, and we will progress together. Ok, that's all. If you want to know me more, please just contact me. :-)P.S. I am living in Shanghai now; if you come to Shanghai sometime, you can let me know, and I can be your tour guide. It's free. :-)
"You are very good at English, I'll start out by saying. After that has been addressed, I would also like to say that I corrected these according to basic American English rules as far as I am aware. I usually use a strange mix of the two so if somebody corrects it a different way, it may be due to that. Also, I corrected this to the way that I personally would have written it. Make sure you always put a space after a period and capitalize the next letter. That is very important in making yourself look literate and will add to the appearance of your writing ten-fold. I hope you can gain SOMETHING out of my little corrections. Thank you for putting up the information. I don't think I'm visiting Shanhai anytime soon, but I'd keep it in mind if I were. :) Have a nice day." -Kyletin
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