First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because it is a very important language and it's required to find a job. I'm graduated from two months ago and i understand the importance to speak a of speaking good english and to understanding what a foreign person says. I would like to find new friends of from other countries because i like to know get to know new cultures and have life experiences. My native language is italian: i was born and grew up in Italy. I enjoy listening to music, watching tv, to doing creative hobbies such as the creation of jewelry, to traveling. I would also like to participate in a photography course.

Here's how I would write this paragraph. It flows smoother. 

I'm learning English because it's a very important language and it's required to find a job. I graduated two months ago and I understand the importance of speaking good english and understanding what a foreign person says. (You could also say: I understand how important it is to speak good english and understand what a foreign person says). I would like to find new friends from other countries because I enjoy getting to know new cultures and having life experiences. My native language is Italian. I was born in Italy and I grew up there. I enjoy listening to music, watching tv, and traveling. I also enjoy creative hobbies like creating jewelry. I would also like to take a photography course. 

We have the same hobbies :) 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because it is a very important language very important and is required to find job. I'm graduated from two months ago and I understand the importance to speak a good english and to understand what a foreign person says. I would like to find new friends from other countries because I enjoy getting to know new cultures and having new life experiences. My native language is italian: I was born and grew in Italy. I enjoy listening to music, watching tv, doing creative hobbies such as the creating of jewelery, traveling and i would like to participate in a photography course.

Good job! :) 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because it is a  language very important and researched to find job. I'm graduated from two mounths and i understand the importance to speak a good english and to understand what a foreign person says. I would ***** find new friends of other countries because i like to know **** new cultures and life experinces. My native language is italian: i was born and grew ** in Italy. I enjoy to listen music, watch tv, to do creative hobbies such as the creation of jewels, to travel and I  would *** ** partecipate to a photography course.

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Your English is very good, but be careful with CAPITAL letters and spelling.

Good luck in finding a job!

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I'm learning English because it is a very important language and required? to find job. I graduated  two mounths ago and I understand the importance of speaking a good English and understanding what a foreign person says. I would find to find new friends from other countries because I like to know about new cultures and life experiences. My native language is Italian: I was born and grew up in Italy. I like  to listen to music, to watch tv,  to do creative hobbies such as the creation of jewels, to travel and I would to participate in a photography course.