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Travel to Argentina One year ago, I was in Argentina. It was a wonderful trip and I´ve gone with my family. We had a cool time in this country and we spended our time visiting tourist places, like Casa Rosada, Palermo, Boca Junior Stadium and Carminito. The weather was good. I´ve visited parks and museums too. In my opinion, a trip to Argentina is a must in you agenda. I hope that in future, I would visit this amazing place again!

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Travel to Argentina

A year ago, I was in Argentina. It was a wonderful trip, and I went with my family. We had a cool time in this country, and we spent our time visiting tourist places, like Casa Rosada, Palermo, Boca Junior Stadium and Carminito. The weather was good. I visited parks and museums too. In my opinion, a trip to Argentina is a must in your agenda. I hope that in the future, I would visit this amazing place again!

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Travel to Argentina

One year ago,[no comma needed here] I was in Argentina. It was a wonderful trip and I´ve gone with my family. We had a cool time in this country and we spended our time visiting tourist places, [no comma needed here] like Casa Rosada, Palermo, Boca Junior Stadium[optional comma here - see below] and Carminito. The weather was good. I´ve visited parks and museums too. In my opinion, a trip to Argentina is a must in you agenda. I hope that in future, I would will or can visit this amazing place again!

I'm just picking up from UkeLela's corrections, which I agree with.
Good work!
There seems to be a change in the use of the "serial comma" in English now. It used to be that you didn't use it before the last item in a list: One, two and three.
But it is in many style manuals (for publications) now to use it: One, two, and three.
Not a real important thing but worth mentioning. Don't worry about it.
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I'd love to go there too! I've never been to South America.
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Haaahahah =D I know, Buenos Aires and Rosario are great!!! I love this country, you must come back and drink some mates with me!! =D
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I want to go to the place

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