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从意大利的新闻 x) 你好!!!很多时间我不写。。很忙!9月我很想去北京。。但组织旅行不简单!!。。我在找出租的房间!!很难。。 我也有一个消息!我的葵花开放了!!很漂亮!看看这张照片把!! hi there!! It's a long time I hadn't written anything...I was busy! I would like to go to Beijing this September...but organizing the travel isn't easy!..I'm in search of an apartment for rent...it's difficult! However I also have news! My sunflowers bloomed!!they're wonderful! Look at the photo!!! 再见!!!! 嘉瀛 sara :)

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Beautiful flower :)

 

从意大利的新闻 x)

你好!!!很多时间我不写。。很忙!

我很长时间都没有写些什么(anything)了,因为我很忙。

it is a long time= 很长时间

anything=(only here)什么/东西

了 is used to describe perfect past tense.

"You hadn't written anything for a long time" and "I was busy" has cause-and-effects relationship, so you should use "因为A,所以B" , “A,因为B” ,"A,所以B" to conect two clauses.

9月我很想去北京。。

我很想9月去北京。If you put 9月 at the beginning, it means the action after it is something will happen then. So your sentences means" I will want to go to Beijing on September". It is logically wrong. So you should say 我很想9月去北京, cause 9月 is a part to limit the time that you go to Beijing.

但组织旅行不简单!!。。

但计划旅行不简单。“组织” means you organize more than 2 people to do sth together. For example, you can 组织 a meeting. Anyway, it should be something involved many people and you are the organizer.

我在找出租的房间!!很难。。
我也有一个消息!

我有一个好消息!or 此外,我有一个好消息!

Most of time, we will add adj. before 消息, good news or bad news.

Only when others already told you a good news, you can say "也", bcz it means "also", "too", or "as well"

我的葵花开放了!!很漂亮!看看这张照片把!!

hi there!! It's a long time I hadn't written anything...I was busy! I would like to go to Beijing this September...but organizing the travel isn't easy!..I'm in search of an apartment for rent...it's difficult!
However I also have news! My sunflowers bloomed!!they're wonderful! Look at the photo!!!

再见!!!!
嘉瀛 sara :)

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从意大利的新闻 x)

你好!!!很多(长)时间我不写(任何东西了)。。(我)很忙!(今年)9月我很想去北京。。但组织旅行不简单(容易)!!。。我在找出租的房间(公寓(中国人习惯上把“公寓”也称为“房子”。“房间”是指“room”. “找出租的房间”意味着你只租住一套公寓里的某个房间,这套公寓你将和别人共同租住。))!!很难。。
我也有一个消息!我的葵花开放了!!很漂亮!看看这张照片把!!

hi there!! It's a long time I hadn't written anything...I was busy! I would like to go to Beijing this September...but organizing the travel isn't easy!..I'm in search of an apartment for rent...it's difficult!
However I also have news! My sunflowers bloomed!!they're wonderful! Look at the photo!!!

再见!!!!
嘉瀛 sara :)

 

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我还是第一次看到向日葵被养在花盆里。我一直以为向日葵只能种在地里。>_<

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从意大利的新闻 x)

你好!!!很多时间我不写。。很忙!9月我很想去北京。。但组织旅行不简单!!。。我在找出租的房间!!很难。。
我也有一个消息!我的葵花开放了!!很漂亮!看看这张照片把!!

hi there!! It's a long time I hadn't written anything...I was busy! I would like to go to Beijing this September...but organizing the travel isn't easy!..I'm in search of an apartment for rent...it's difficult!
However I also have news! My sunflowers bloomed!!they're wonderful! Look at the photo!!!

再见!!!!
嘉瀛 sara :)

这样说不地道,应该是 我已经很久没写东西了

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@Blade: 谢谢国米的迷!前天你们赢了!!bravi :) @Camilla: si, forse vengo in Cina!!mi piacerebbe molto passare a Shanghai, perchè non l'ho mai vista!ma non so se riuscirò...cmq prima o poi visiterò anche 上海!我希望! @Liz: thank you! :)
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very beautiful sunflower :)

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