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事完了，無遺憾。 竹簾外，倆 燕子 忽飛來，忽飛去 事完了，無遺憾。 有一个机会，但我错过了。

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这是一课文的内容 写的很好，没错呵！
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事完了，無遺憾。

 

竹簾外，倆 燕子 I prefer, 兩隻燕

忽飛來，忽飛去
事完了，無遺憾。

有一个机会，但我错过了。

 

I think you should join our little group, "A Poet's Soul" for finer translation between English and Chinese poems.

 

http://www.italki.com/groups/4194

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